Community Profile - Quote Sandwich #2 - Jay's Practice Model Including In-Text Citations - Abstinence-Only Sex Ed. Programs

Estimados Estudiantes,

Let's Call This Quote Sandwich #2 - 

Here is what you do:

Create Your Community Profile Quote Sandwich

  • First, introduce your Research Quote -  What? Who?  What's Going On? - 100 words
  • In the middle, insert your  Quote – followed by your in-text citation
  • At the end of the paragraph, explain your quote - How Do You See It? - 100 words

TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THE POINTS!

* Insert an image at the top of your submission

* Create an interesting title

* Submit your Sandwich

* Follow up with an MLA Works Cited List - One Entry

This is what I did - to add to my Teen Pregnancy Essay:

 

You're a Stick of Gum

In Slate Magazine, writer Amanda Hess examines the value of  Abstinence-Only Sex Ed programs in our public schools.  According to her, these programs use shame as a learning tool.  In effect, they try to frighten teenagers instead of educate them.  She quotes Elizabeth Smart: “I remember in school one time, I had a teacher who was talking about abstinence,” Smart told the panel. “And she said, ‘Imagine you’re a stick of gum. When you engage in sex, that’s like getting chewed. And if you do that lots of times, you’re going to become an old piece of gum, and who is going to want you after that?’ Well, that’s terrible. No one should ever say that. But for me, I thought, ‘I’m that chewed-up piece of gum.’ Nobody re-chews a piece of gum. You throw it away. And that’s how easy it is to feel you no longer have worth. Your life no longer has value”  ( par. 5).  I understand the writers point. Comparing a young woman to a piece of gum shows a lack of respect and understanding for today’s generation. When you remove the respect from the classroom, you also lose the message. No one is going to learn much of anything.

Works Cited

Hess, Amanda. “Elizabeth Smart Says Pro-Abstinence Sex Ed Harms Victims of Rape.”  XXfactor: What Women Really Think. Slate.  6 May 2013.  Web.  16 April 2018. 

Here is the Cool Part:

* Once you are done, insert your sandwich into your essay - It will look GREAT!

* Once you are done with that, post your sandwich on your class blog.

* TAKE THE POINTS!