Tattoo You - Body Paragraph - Cause and Effect - Deep Kobe

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"Better learn not to talk to me. You shake the tree, a leopard's gonna fall out."

- Kobe Bryant

Estimados Estudiantes,

Today I provide you with a basic step-by-step model for the development of a body paragraph. I use four steps:

a. Topic Sentence

b. Explanation/Clarification

c. Illustration

d. Conclusion

Here is what I did for my Kobe Bryant essay:

Jay’s Sample Tattoo Paragraph - Deep Kobe - Step-by-Step:

Try this strategy to help you analyze your tattoo. Break up your writing into parts. Fill up each box with the suggested material. Then join the boxes at the end.

Step One - The Topic Sentence (one sentence)

Please begin every paragraph with a topic sentence. You need to present a meaningful idea to your readers. Don’t hesitate to use a transitional expression for emphasis.

Often people look to tattoos as a way to boost their street cred(ibility).

Step Two - Develop your idea (2-3 sentences)

Take one or two sentences to explain and clarify your topic sentence. Here you have the chance to show off your critical thinking skills. Add your explanation directly to your topic sentence. (Hint: think cause and effect. Reasons? Consequences?

In today’s crazy, fast-paced modern world, people don’t have the time to know who you are or what you are about. If you don’t take the time to distinguish yourself, life just might pass you by. That’s why many people opt for tattoos to establish themselves in a visual way. They use their tattoos to announce their arrival and make a statement. . Bikers, gangstahs, and porn stars have their own reasons for sending a message with their tattoos.

Step Three – Illustration

Here keep it brief. Can you identify and describe something from your tattoo experience that supports your topic sentence? Use specific details.

They use their tattoos to remind people who they are. However, even people who seem to have everything find themselves with the same need. Kobe Bryant, for example, has inked up his entire right arm. He has a huge crown along his bulging bicep. Clearly, this guy is a competitor. He wants to show opponents and fans his toughness. He’s makes millions of dollars and lives in a giant mansion, but his tattoos are a reminder of the streets he came fro

Step Four : Conclusion (2-3 sentences)

Tie your comparison support together with an emphatic statement.

I’m not sure I understand why Kobe Bryant has to prove his toughness to anybody, but I empathize with peoplewho want to assert themselves. When people don’t have the means or opportunity express themselves, often their tattoos will attract the attention they want or need.

This is the way mine is going to look in my essay:

Often people look to tattoos as a way to boost their street cred(ibility). In today’s crazy, fast-paced modern world, people don’t have the time to know who you are or what you are about. If you don’t take the time to distinguish yourself, life just might pass you buy. That’s why many people opt for tattoos to establish themselves in a visual way. They use their tattoos to announce their arrival and make a statement. Bikers, gangstahs, and porn stars have their own reasons for sending a message with their tattoos. I’m sure something is missing in their lives, or something has been taken away. They use their tattoos to remind people who they are. However, even people who seem to have everything find themselves with the same need. Kobe Bryant, for example, has inked up his entire right arm. He has a huge crown along his bulging bicep. Clearly, this guy is a competitor. He wants to show opponents and fans his toughness. He’s makes millions of dollars and lives in a giant mansion, but his tattoos are a reminder of the streets he came from. I’m not sure I understand why Kobe Bryant has to prove his toughness to anybody, but I empathize with people who want to assert themselves. When people don’t have the means or opportunity express themselves, their tattoos will often attract the attention they want or need.

Here is what you do:

a. Submit your paragraph on CANVAS/Discussions - Cause and Effect Paragraph

b. Keep a typed copy inside your Tattoo You folder

This is going to be great. You will see.

Paz,